feedback wanted

[JacJac]

hi all, i'm new the the DSLR world and learning different techniques of photography.
i have just learnt how to take these awsome startrail photos with alot of trial and error and finally got the image i wanted.
have a look and tell me what you think and how i can improve any feedback positive or negative welcome and feel free to browse through my other photos
Jacqui Hunt's Photos | Facebook

thanks
Jacqui

edit: just figured out i can upload images on my profile so i'm currently doing that now

 

[sobolik]

It is interesting but people don't see the world that way. So it lacks staying power beyond the casual glance. It is a good teaching exercise though.

 

[Jcampbelll]

People don't like clicking on links. Post pictures directly on to the thread and you will get replies.

How to post pictures.

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

I feel its a little washed out or overexposed. Maybe try playing with the White Balamce and maybe the Contrast a hair...

Also I think you got too much of the leafe/tree thingy in the shot. I'd prefer to see less of it or none of it.

 

[JacJac]

thanks all
Sobolik- I really like the real good ones this was just a trial i want to use it with a interesting landscape with only a small amount of startrail.

Jcampbell- Thanks i had soon figured out after how to post the images on the thread and in my profile.

Bus Rider- i agree, i used the tree to focus somewhat on the stars because i couldnt see them through my camera so i suppose this is why the stars arent so clear.
and there is so much of the tree because i only have a small back yard i had to choose between the tree and the roof :S. but i think i well get a much better shot next time out in the open where there is no city lights.

Thanks for the feedback all