ya i agree with MC, super over processed, that looks "cool" for your artsy photos that dont have people in them. but the portraits are a little hard on my eyes. not to mention the laying down thing in the woods is just plain uncomfortable looking (i used to live in the woods so i know). compositionally i was having trouble as well as the out of focus thing. just keep at it and it will improve but it certainly doesn't hurt to do a little reading up on some of these things. this forum is a wealth of information as well. may i suggest setting up a shoot, and posting some of the photos pre-photoshopped for C&C. this can be most helpful as you learn how to be a better photographer
oh.. and you dont necessarily need a "pro" camera to take pro shots. learn with what you have, assuming its an dslr, even entry level cameras in the right hands can produce far better images than the guy that thinks a 6k camera will somehow cure their crappy eyesight.

and good luck!