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I like the PP done to it, and the idea behind it.. only nit pick would be that i'd like a little more space on the left side. The blown out parts of the umbrella don't bother me, just kind of adds to the idea.
Any more from that shoot?
both pics are nice. I love the concept. If I were to nitpick, I would have to say that the first one was brightened a bit too much in PP.