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Angela Lourenço

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Canon T4i - 18-135mm at 36mm (cropped)
f16 - 1/200sec - Iso 100
I used 2 speelites, 1 for the short light and another do the hair light

I wanted this photo to be very hollywoodian and glamorous, like a 60's portrait of a movie star.
 

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Might look really nice.....but you forgot to load it! ;)
 
Very nice indeed. The only very, very minor nit I can see is the location of the hair light; I think a little higher up so that the crown has some illumination, but other than that? Nailed it.
 
Very nice indeed. The only very, very minor nit I can see is the location of the hair light; I think a little higher up so that the crown has some illumination, but other than that? Nailed it.
Hi, Tirediron. Actually, I noticed that and I chose to keep it that way because, even though the hair light is not 100% correct for this type of photo, I liked the insinuated triangle created from the face towards the shoulder, then to the lit area of the hair. I just thought it would make the picture more dinamic. Anyway, I see your point of view and thank you for your comment! ;)
 
Excellent pose! If you don't mind a suggestion though, 50's Hollywood Glamour was generally associated with large format film so I would go more for that look which is gentler gradation of the mid-tones and a gentle roll-off of the highs.
Offered only as a suggestion:

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Have to agree with Tim on this--the highlights in the original, particularly on the face, were distracting. Film would have handled the highlights with a more gentle gradation.
 
Pretty model. Have you considered a blue tone? I hope you don't mind. I like the original but was curious as to a blue tone.

_MG_5698Blue.webp
 

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