you definitely need to work on the exposure. what camera are you using? what fomat are yo shooting in? if you shoot in RAW format then you can adjust the exposure beore you edit the pictures, but its best to get it as close to what you want at first as possible. always do some test shots and load them before finishing your shoot. what kind of studio lighting are you using?
personally i think compositionally the first picture was your best of the bunch, if only it wasnt so dark, and maybe a little work in photoshop could really improve it. in the first pic I would also photoshop out that socket.
also try plying around with the curves feture in photoshop.
sorry all this assuming you have photoshpo its th eonly program I know how to use. You are right, you have the equiptment and the space. and I think you have a good eye. You just have to learn how to use your equiptment more efficiently, and learn more about post processing.
I'm using a Nikon D50 for these shots, and I was shooting in the highest level jpg setting. You're right, I TOTALLY should have been in raw... Also I was also using a pentax k1000 for B&W versions I have yet to develop
You guys asked what lighting equipment I have, so here it is:
Speedotron 400 Powerpack, with full / half power switching, no asymetrical or power adjustinility.
2 MW3U's
2 M90's
One Silver Reflector umbrella
One white shoot through umbrella
Snoot for MW3U
Grid with Gel holder for MW3U
Photoslave (used with D50)
10' Sync Cable (for Pentax)
Stands
(I got the setup for 300 bucks including a rolling cart)
Yes I also have photoshop, I think I might have actualy OVER darkened the photos in photoshop lending to their dark nature, my laptop at home is not color calibrated at all so today when I looked at them at work, they were uber dark.
first of all, what kind of lights are they? Are they hot lights or strobes?
If they are strobe (flash), can you adjust the output? If you cannot, then you will need to move them a bit closer. Adjusting shutter speed for flash is irrelevant as the flash is just that, flash. If they are hotlights, then yes, you can adjust shutter speed, but you will have to admonish your model to sit still if your speed is slower than a 45th. You can also open up your aperature to allow more light. This will give you more shallow depth, but that isn't really a bad thing.
The lighting that you have posted seems pretty flat. Watch those power outlets...they are composition killers. Your 3rd shot as adequate light, but your depth is too deep, and the wall is in sharp focus. While the texture is nice, it distracts from the model. Also, with shots two and three, think about the rule of thirds and get your subject out of the bullseye.
You're well on your way. Keep shooting and shooting. Don't be afraid to experiment with different lighting set ups and positioning of the lights. the more you do this, the more you will learn about what works and what doesn't.
Thanks for the suggestions! I must strive to make my depth of field more shallow in these digital shots. On the Pentax I was using F2 so Im sure they have better depth of field, I think I was using around F5.6 on these because I was at the 90mm position and it's a variable aperture lense :thumbdown:
Here are another few shots from the shoot, are these any better?
Thanks again guys!