First attempt at writing with light C&C please!

[JMBriggs]

These are a couple from my first attempt at writing with light. Suggestions? I know the comp is a bit off but we were using a remote and then running around with a flashlight trying to guess where we were in the frame.

 

[christian.rudman]

These are interesting. Take the lightpainting out into the world, light up some underground tunnels and spray "love" all through the frame. These are nice but unoriginal in their current state, try actually using setting in your lightpainting. I like the inclusion of the flowers in the last one, that's kind of what I am talking about.

good luck in the lightpainting, it is way fun to play around with!

 

[JMBriggs]

Yeah I would like to do more with having a background subject and then having the lightdrawing outlining or on top of the main subject, I just need to get set up with some better lights... This was just done with my bestie, a flashlight out of her trunk, a tripod and an IR remote.