First macro

[Hill202]

Trying out a new lens. C&C is appreciated.

Thanks

 

[c_mac]

the DOF is crazy on that one! i like it. nice colors.

 

[TimboAA]

Try a higher F-stop. The only thing that bugs me is that shallow DOF.

 

[Hill202]

Thanks, I wanted to experiment with the dof. I guess I got carried away

 

[Hill202]

Here's a higher F stop

 

[VoLcOmKiDd911]

much better in my opinion.

 

[Hill202]

Thanks !

 

[NateS]

I agree about the first one. It's distracting being blurry in the middle and clear on both sides. Second one is much better, but I like the colors in the first one better. Try shooting the first one again with the higher Fstop.