First portrait

[Nau]

Hi all,

Here's one of my first studio's portrait



What do you think about this picture?

The other taken this day are visible at this place : Photo - Passion

Nau.

 

[Smokeyr67]

Nice shot for the album

 

[Braineack]

It's cute. But I think it would have been a bit more interesting if the subjects will further from the bg, or a gridded modifier (snoot) was used.

It would create for a much more dramatic lighting, something more like this: http://heylucy.typepad.com/.a/6a00d8341c7e2f53ef011278f8792828a4-600wi

right now, everything is all the same tone gray, and it's a bit flat and a bit boring.


I like the shot of the belly kiss, that's well done.