First Senior Photograph Session C&C

Nanogeek815

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This Was My First Attempt At Senior Photographs For A Friend Of Mine. She Was Very Happy With Them. Please Tell Me What You Think.

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The last photo is a first for me...I have never seen a bull thistle included in a senior portrait!!!

How were these digitized? Are these flatbed scans off of color prints? They do not look optimal on the web, due to focus issues of some sort.
 
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They are just JPEG of the originals. They got fuzzier when i posted them for some reason.
 

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It looks like the focus missed the subject on them all, if you look at the pics you can see where it hit and it wasn't the girl.

#1 and #2 best composition wise but missed focus ruins them. Thistle shot may have some symbolic meaning........................? :D
 

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i bet you using slow speed. less than 1/80. (that's my minimum speed if using hand)
i can assure that your hand are shake !!! please remember your hand are not tripod.

it's a very basic mistakes.
 

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You should change your camera so that it will only have 1 focus point
 

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The location is good and has potential........Try to shoot her again if she's willing.

How do you guys see the exif data??
 
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She was more than happy with the photos but if she decides different i will do them again. Else I'm going to try to practice on other people.
 

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Lighting, posing, composition, focus, all need improvement.
 

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