Looks like a snapshot at night using pop up flash.
+1
It's hard for me to tell what it is, but the composition just doesn't do anything for me. If those are ice crystals (for example) wouldn't they be going straight down due to gravity? I know it was hand held, but that is something to consider. In addition, the out of focus bright area on the right hand side is very distracting. My eyes were instantly drawn there rather than the subject, which would be (I'm assuming) the ice crystals.
It's a good attempt, but if you have the ability to, give it another try, maybe during the day. Try to keep the camera level (or level the horizon in post). Keep an eye on what's in focus and out of focus, and watch out for blown highlights.