First time editing a portrait. How'd I do?

[bleeblu]

Untitled by Mark Harless, on Flickr

 

[Derrel]

Her skin tones have some residual green in them; there needs to be some magenta added to the yellows in Selective Color, to cancel out the green undertones. Her hair also has some green pollution in it, no doubt from those pesky trees and their infernal green leaves!!!

 

[Derrel]

Untitled by Mark Harless, on Flickr

I subtracted 10 points of Cyan and added 73 Magenta in the Yellows, using Selective Color.

 

[jaxx419]

^^ looks too red or pink.. Can't tell on my phone.

 

[mwcfarms]

I think her skin looks better in the second and I probably would have warmed or darkened up the background a bit with a mask.

 

[gsgary]

The shadow over her eye make the shape of her face look strange

 

[gopal]

to me, the hairs on her lips and eye make a different look to a natural flawless portrait....second corrected photo is better.