First time

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Well here goes. This is my first photo I am posting for comment. I am trying to concentrate on the technical aspects such as WB, saturation, IQ etc. Not so much of my nonexistent talent of composing. So here goes. FYI the original photo with all the technical data is missing at this time so this is all I have.





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[dxqcanada]

WB is towards the blue end.

Exposure looks Ok, got shadow detail and whites are not blown out (though could be whiter).

 

[Mully]

This looks more normal to me

 

[Flare]

WB is towards the blue end.

Exposure looks Ok, got shadow detail and whites are not blown out (though could be whiter).

Thank you dxqcanada. Exposure is what I have been working on along with detail. I've been using a lot of my photos as wall paper on my computer at work which when installed gets blown up so the imperfections really show. To hear I'm not that far off makes my day. Thanks.

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This looks more normal to me

Yes Mully that does look much better, more normal. As dxqcanada pointed out and you corrected I need to pay more attention to the whites. Question... Would you want to have a normal looking white or a white that complements the photo even if that is not exactly the normal white?

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