Personally, I like your re-edits. A lot.
However, I don't care for that last cropped version. In theory, I agree with the reasoning behind cropping it, and couldn't quite decide, initially, why I don't like the result.
As best I can explain, in my completely uneducated opinion:
The anthers in the center are leaning towards the top right corner of the photo (in the original)--that tends to lead my eye up and right out of the picture.
The little bit of green background down at the bottom left, though, pulls my eye back down towards it, so it "balances out" more and my eye tends to stay in the frame better. In the cropped version, there's nothing to balance out those leaning anthers, and I just find myself following the line out of the photo instead of into it.
That is *definitely* just my opinion, and it may not even hold water. But it's MY story, and I'm sticking to it.
