Foggy Legnano

[Benjo255]

Here's 3 pics shooted in Legnano (my town) this evening. It was late, dark and there was fog all around and I tried to capture the atmosphere. They are willingly grainy. I would love ayway to hear your C&C.

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[Didereaux]

The first looks like it could have been done in the 1900-1920 era. That is not a put down of the shot. The 3rd is too me a very nicely composed shot. Good zones. Kudos on these.

 

[snowbear119 50]

I really like the framing on the last one.

 

[KenC]

Yeah, the third works well. I like the second, although I'd probably clone out a couple of small bright spots and maybe crop a little on top.

 

[Benjo255]

I would love to know which spot would you clone. I'be thought about cropping the top, but I didn't want to loose the tree.

 

[KenC]

There are two spots in the tree on the right, one behind the bench, all very small, and a few slightly larger ones just on the horizon (also one on the left side of the dog - viewer's left, not dog's). I'd crop the tree in the center just above that lowest branch, the one with a long arc.

 

[Benjo255]

Ok, I'll try!

 

[BillM]

I'm not feeling #1, the object in the foreground just doesn't add to the shot.

For the second, maybe just a little less foreground ?

And I love the third one but i would just tighten the crop on the top, see the little spot at the top of the bridge ? It is just a little distracting, but that is just a minor thing.


Keep posting, good stuff

 

[Benjo255]

Thank you very much. I'll post the pics with the suggested editing and I'll be waiting for the feedbacks!

 

[Benjo255]

Tried with your suggestion:

 

[BillM]

I think that makes them stronger, but others may not agree. Do you think it makes them better ?

 

[denizztrk]

I really like the 3rd , go on

 

[Benjo255]

The crop on the third makes it stronger. Not so sure about the crop on n. 2. ok cloning the light-spots, less and less distracting.

 

[limr33 2]

I like the crop on the 3rd one, but I prefer the original crop on the 2nd one. The tighter crop might get some of the clutter of the tree out (which didn't actually bother me) but it also cuts off the lamppost.

The second picture is my favorite, just as it was in the OP. #3 is pretty great, too.

 

[Benjo255]

Thank you very much for the feedback!