French B&W

[huguet]

Hello I am French and I come to share some B&W. I hope that you will like.

Au-delà du regard - Jean-luc HUGUET

 

[Designer]

Welcome!

Even though the sky is highly figured, I think the building is too small in the frame. I would rather make the building prominent with some sky to frame it.

 

[Rick58]

On the same lines as Designer, I can see a very strong panoramic out of this shot, losing the top portion of the sky. This keeps the dramatic portion of the sky while enlarging the structure

 

[LilyBee]

As the others said. Plus I think youre well on your way just need little more practice.

 

[Allan Nguyen]

Nice picture. I think you want to make the house small to enhance the size of sky. It is a good idea but somehow it makes the outlook on picture is hard to catch up. It seems like you have a big picture for yourself. The more you practice the more beautiful pictures you have.