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[Fotofashion.no]

just trying a little creative edit. Oh yeah, I designed the chair my self.


seccon image from the same shoot

 

[tirediron]

A little too 'out there' for my tastes, but I can certainly appreciate the work!

 

[Fotofashion.no]

yeah, I like alternatives

 

[jenko]

I prefer the first. Not sure about the objects surrounding her head, a bit distracting. The ceiling is the weakest part. The floor, walls, all give this illusion of being inside a metal room or something, but the ceiling doesn't play along, and that sort of breaks the spell, if that makes sense. It looks like it could be water, paint, clouds, but I'm not really sure what it is, and the spell is broken for me. So my suggestion would be to rework that ceiling and make it seamless. I do like the lighting, her pose, and the her expression.

The second shot, well, to be very blunt and honest it has that look of Photoshop kitsch, like it's the result of following a tutorial in a Photoshop magazine. The shot itself doesn't look bad to me, and I am wondering what it would look like without all the extra processing, and converted to black and white.

 

[Warhorse]

I like them, pretty model and all.

Very "avant-garde".

 

[paigew]

Love the first. Nice chair too.


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[Fotofashion.no]

Thank you

actually it is water that is moving a lot, so it is not so transparent. Thank you

 

[Newtricks]

Fantastic work, I really like the first one.