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Reminds me of a Norman Rockwell painting. All you need is two or three little girls playing with dolls, and a handful of boys heading to the empty lot with baseball equipment............

Yet the right side of the image contains 90% of anything visually attractive... the left half, parked cars and a distant gas station.
 
I waited 30 freaking minutes for the CSX train but the switch jammed so there was a no go for the train.
Maybe in a few months when we go back down I will try again. I am actually trying to move down to Florida where
this was taken the entire purpose of the trip was 90% vacation 10% looking at places to live different neighborhoods and
house's that are for sale.

What I really been wanting to take a hdr image of is a war reenactment
that would be cool with the powder guns going off and canons.
 
I actually think you could have edited the original exposure to get close to the HDR - by bumping up the contrast and saturation. Its a nice HDR nonetheless. A train in there would be cool!
 
Provo, nice image - composition is quite good - leading lines in train tracks takes your eyes through the image and the roofline takes your eyes out of the image. The only thing I would do is maybe change the point of view to get more of the building in, get rid of the "parking/speed limit" sign as it detracts from the overall image and changes the point of concentration/focus for your eyes. By getting more of the building in, you get rid of some of the "parking" stuff on the left. I would try and leave the horizon where it is.

Cheers,

WesternGuy
 

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