not even sure what im looking at, everything thing seems very blurry....
you need to think less about what looks good to your eyes and more about whats going to look good to the camera, this may have looked very good with your eyes, but once you took a picture of it it really didnt capture what you wanted
I totally missed the swinging piece of the windchime until I read your explaination. One should be able to figure out the main focus of a picture without any help from the photographer. It's poorly composed with the only in sharp elements being the windchime main section, and the metal holder.
The problem is that while you look at the image, you know what it is.... so you may be enjoying how you converted this...but others????? that is the problem