Go ahead and nit pik it please :) C&C

[CorrieMichael]

1. 2.

 

[tirediron]

Cropped a little tight on the bottom, and the right image seems to have WB issues, but overall, not bad at all.

 

[kathyt]

I think you need to add a touch of magenta to #2, but it is really cute.

 

[CorrieMichael]

Cropped a little tight on the bottom, and the right image seems to have WB issues, but overall, not bad at all.

The second one was actually edited the same time with the same numbers but for some reason uploading it looks different. when I click on it it looks the same - the same wb.......... I thought maybe I didn't convert it so just did it again and uploaded it but the same. :-/ sorry here is another of the image in its correct wb https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?...6482502.113671.466447043385681&type=1&theater


Thanks

 

[CorrieMichael]

its bugging the hell out of me seeing it like that......................

 

[kathyt]

Yeah that is much better. Weird.

 

[CorrieMichael]

Yeah that is much better. Weird.

why would it do that?

 

[CorrieMichael]

Here is another from the same shoot

 

[mmaria]

here is a nit pik....
I really don't like seeing lines crossing behind the head...could you move her a bit to front to avoid that? the line being from the bed thing... and don't take it seriously if no one else is bothered with that, it is just and only me

 

[Braineack]

#1 does not match the editing. #2 works; it's a bit more dreamy.

I like #3 a lot, but I'm not feeling the overall pink hue cast. I'd rather see this correct for white balance and skin tones.

I typically tend to like your processing, but on these they feel a bit muted and drab, and that's pretty sad for a cute little princess...

 

[manaheim]

Is it me? They all look a little underexposed.

 

[runnah]

Is it me? They all look a little underexposed.

Agreed. Flat.

 

[amolitor]

Yeah, they all read as "huh, that's a little grey" to me as well. Possibly the girl is lit well, but the background is a little dim? I can't really put my finger on it, but I definitely want these things to read white and bright, and they ain't.

 

[CorrieMichael]

Is it me? They all look a little underexposed.

Agreed. Flat.

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^^^^ So what did you do to change this?
Did you use the exposure tab in lightroom
Or did you do an adjustment layer?
OR none of the above

 

[runnah]

Adjusted the levels. Specifically the highlights.