Golfing - Did I Go Overboard?

[H4X1MA]

I've Been doing a lot of PS experimenting lately so I'm wondering if this looks overboard, or just bad. Was concentrating on the sky but I think I may have oversharpened.

Composition, I should have had her in the left of the frame. Safety, I'm not standing anywhere in front of her when she's shooting a ball!

8mm ISO 100 f/22 1/125s

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

Its nice... But I can bately see the golfer... Maybe its just my old eyes though...

 

[D-B-J]

The sky looks like a badly overcooked HDR. I don't mind the composition, but definitely tone down the clarity, or sharpness(depending on what program you used)

 

[Derrel]

Definitely...overboard and straight to Davey Jones's locker...

 

[H4X1MA]

^ lol, nice.

I was thinking the same with the HDR look in the clouds. back to stage 1 for this one.

 

[Dmitri]

Its not that bad, but while you're PSing you might want to lighten the golfer up a bit, or somehow draw attention to her. Right now everything is pretty flat.

 

[rcarpenter3d]

The photo no longer shows up for me. Flickr error message stating the photo is no longer available.

 

[Capeesh]

As there was no golf pic in here, I thought I would add one !

18th hole St.Andrews Scotland ...