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[tmjjk]

Any comments or critique are welcome. I appreciate the feedback and am striving to learn and your input has been a great learning experience.

 

[tirediron]

Not bad! There's a few minor nits here and there, but overall, seems like a good, solid effort, and a result with which the bride will be happy!

 

[pixmedic]

Too many to critique individually, but overall it is a nice set.
In #1 I might have cropped in just a hair more and gotten rid of that little bit of roof showing.

 

[dennybeall]

A lot of shots, many quite good in the candid group. The first group shot could have been shot quite a bit closer. Also the pom-poms are blocking faces in two or three instances. I like all the color and the settings.

 

[W.Y.Photo]

The sheet that shows the cake.. Try switching the middle right cake detail with the race car detail shot.

 

[Austin Greene]

Take this with a grain of salt as I haven't even shot my first wedding. But, from a standard old portrait perspective I like the set overall. Good lens-work, and you managed the group shots well. The only thing I wish I saw was more candids, more "moments", and less "hey, say hi to the camera!" shots.

 

[LiveinColor]

I think your last image is a great moment. I would try cropping it to a vertical to get rid of the distractions in the background and really focus on them.