Had a bit more practice, want some C&C

[jay956]

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IMG_6051B&W by jaywf956, on Flickr

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IMG_0848 by jaywf956, on Flickr

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IMG_0877 by jaywf956, on Flickr

 

[EIngerson]

1 and 2 leave me wondering what the image is supposed to be. They're not framed very well to tell the story.
#1 I don't know what I'm looking at other than a redbull can.
#2 I am left wondering what he is riding.
#3 just doesn't do anything for me. There's nothing in the photo to say why this door is interesting.

 

[MLeeK]

1 and 2 leave me wondering what the image is supposed to be. They're not framed very well to tell the story.
#1 I don't know what I'm looking at other than a redbull can.
#2 I am left wondering what he is riding.
#3 just doesn't do anything for me. There's nothing in the photo to say why this door is interesting.

2 his face is out of focus.

Your conversions are decent. Could use a little boost in brightness.

 

[jay956]

Thanks!