Had a bit more practice, want some C&C

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  1. jay956

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    EIngerson Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    1 and 2 leave me wondering what the image is supposed to be. They're not framed very well to tell the story.
    #1 I don't know what I'm looking at other than a redbull can.
    #2 I am left wondering what he is riding.
    #3 just doesn't do anything for me. There's nothing in the photo to say why this door is interesting.
     
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    2 his face is out of focus.

    Your conversions are decent. Could use a little boost in brightness.
     
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