have a seat

[timethief]

I am really curious at how this looks like through someone else's eyes.

 

[dcclark]

Wow, the patterns of the wall and floor are bugging my eyes out!

The patterns actually (to me) seem to create a sense of movement, which is funny for a still-life sort of photo. It is actually a bit hard to look at.

 

[mrodgers]

An ever so slight crop on the left side to make it symmetrical may do it for me. Something is off for me and I think it's the more left wall showing than right wall.

Yeah, the patterns. They are doing crazy stuff to my eyes as well.

 

[Josh66]

Kinda looks 3D, I like it. :thumbup:
(It has depth - I feel like I'm there.)

I agree that a small crop for symmetry would help a lot.

 

[freeflydive]

I like how the lines in the foreground lead your eye to the wall/benches.

Cheers,
Majdi

 

[Ngoface]

The walls make the area look cluttered and isolated. It looks like a great place to have a photoshoot though. Great shot by the way.

 

[Torus34]

It looks over-photoshopped.

 

[Steph]

It does not work for me: too much contrast and too much barrel distortion.

 

[teneighty23]

i agree with the last two, slightly overdone, i mean as your doing it it may seem like its getting better and better as you do it, i did that on a few of my pics but everyone told me they look like pencil drawings, so i just made subtle changes and it seems to work better when it looks real, only enhanced.

 

[timethief]

Thank you all for the comments, much appreciated.

 

[crazycreature11]

crop n post again .... would appreciate it

 

[timethief]

crop n post again .... would appreciate it

I already had it done actually.
here it is.
I decided to do a series of simillar pictures taking into consideration the comments on this thread.

 

[Artograph]

Very cool...I like the 2nd one best!

:O)

 

[timethief]

Very cool...I like the 2nd one best!

:O)

thanks Artograph. i did a few more shots like this today, but couldnt get same effect. am working on it though.

 

[C.Lloyd]

It's odd that the right bench has longer legs and a shorter back than the left, making it the same overall height...

i like the 2nd one better, too.