Haven't uploaded in awhile. Comments and Feedback are greatly appreciated!

[Eva D]

Hello Everyone! I been busy with trying to improve my photography, was wondering what you guys think of these pics. I haven't uploaded in a few months... kinda been lacking inspiration so hope you guys like. Please let me know what I could do to fix these pics either during the shoot or in cs5. Thank you in advance in looking at my post and comments if you leave them. (P.S I shot all the images with a 50 mm 1.8 Canon Lens with my Canon T2i)

500px / Eva Futch / Photos

1. Sh/Sp 1/2500 F/2.8 ISO 200

2. Sh/Sp 1/4000 f/3.2 ISO 200

3. Sh/Sp 1/1250 f/2.8 ISO 200

4. Sh/Sp 1/1000 f/3.2 ISO 200

5. Sh/Sp 1/1000 f/3.2 ISO 200

 

[mommy-medic]

My initial thought was just "she's too big for bubbles and balloons". I know that's not terribly helpful, but maybe use age appropriate props next time?

 

[KBM1016]

I don't like the composition. I think there is room for improvement in that aspect. I also don't like how you can't see her face in #2. All of my attention is drawn to the yellow balloons.

 

[Eva D]

Besides the fact that ya'll didn't like the props because of age, and I need to focus on my composition, is there anything else that I can do to improve. I'm trying to think more creatively and can't quite think of any good ideas.

 

[Derrel]

One needs to watch out for plain, ugly "bald" skies...when the sky is plain white or light gray in the final image, it's often quite distracting. Like in shot #3...the sky at the top, and the two telephone poles...just kills the shot...

 

[DScience]

Besides the fact that ya'll didn't like the props because of age, and I need to focus on my composition, is there anything else that I can do to improve. I'm trying to think more creatively and can't quite think of any good ideas.

Hi there. I just wanted to say that there is a lot of room for improvement in terms of general quality of the photos (exposure, composition, processing). However, I really like your creative eye and think you should continue with this style. You definitely have an artistic side to the photos that is inviting. Keep it up!