"He won't do that again"

[JasonLambert]

"He won't do that again"

EDIT: Old image deleted from flickr. Here is the final update.

 

[PerfectlyFlawed]

Whatd you do to her?! Lol

 

[RobNZ]

Staging a shoot I hope, lmao.

It looks too nice for the subject matter IMO, maybe go gritty and raw.

 

[Derrel]

Nothing like a couple rounds of .380 to make a guy see the error of his ways...right?

 

[JasonLambert]

I edited this on my laptop... Does the bruise on her eye and the gun show up fine? It's supposed to be dark but I hope it's not too dark.

 

[JasonLambert]

Here is another edit I did.

EDIT: This edit has been deleted from flickr. Here is the final version.

 

[LaFoto]

New edit works better, as in the first version the gun did disappear in the darkness.

And since you're still around to actually POST these photos, I am now CONVINCED it is only a staged photo .

 

[JasonLambert]

New edit works better, as in the first version the gun did disappear in the darkness.

And since you're still around to actually POST these photos, I am now CONVINCED it is only a staged photo .

I may just be his... MY wife posting as if I were him... ME!

 

[Gaerek]

Original is too dark. Gun disappears (though still a bit visible) and the bruise just looks like a shadow under the eye. New one is much better. Nice work!

 

[Petraio Prime]

"He won't do that again"

Too dark. Needs highlights on gun.

 

[Morpheuss]

the edit looks better... damn that photo gave me chills

 

[TekGino]

I kind of like the first one. It's almost as if the
candle is the only light in the room, and it makes
me really look hard at the picture. The 2nd pic looks
like the sun is beaming in through a window, so why
would there be a lit candle? I like the concept, nice
shot man.

 

[Petraio Prime]

I kind of like the first one. It's almost as if the
candle is the only light in the room, and it makes
me really look hard at the picture. The 2nd pic looks
like the sun is beaming in through a window, so why
would there be a lit candle? I like the concept, nice
shot man.

This sort of photo requires much care in lighting, to give both form and detail to the important areas without over-lighting. There should have been some overall lighting to the lower parts of the image. More from the left side, in particular. I would recommend 'rim' lighting here, to keep most of the body in shadow, and then some highlights for the gun and face, etc.

Here's an example of rim lighting:

http://fineartamerica.com/images-medium/liz-rim-light-2-jeff-fiore.jpg

another:

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_EaAEqZ_hd...U/T5t7LRo-7qI/s400/Rim+Lighting_PowerPees.png

 

[TekGino]

I kind of like the first one. It's almost as if the
candle is the only light in the room, and it makes
me really look hard at the picture. The 2nd pic looks
like the sun is beaming in through a window, so why
would there be a lit candle? I like the concept, nice
shot man.

This sort of photo requires much care in lighting, to give both form and detail to the important areas without over-lighting. There should have been some overall lighting to the lower parts of the image. More from the left side, in particular. I would recommend 'rim' lighting here, to keep most of the body in shadow, and then some highlights for the gun and face, etc.

Here's an example of rim lighting:

http://fineartamerica.com/images-medium/liz-rim-light-2-jeff-fiore.jpg

another:

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_EaAEqZ_hd...U/T5t7LRo-7qI/s400/Rim+Lighting_PowerPees.png

I see what you mean, and agree with bringing
the light in from the left. (makes sense)

A "MAY NOT BE SAFE FOR WORK" warning would have been nice.

She looks harmless to me.

 

[amberl]

what is the red thing sticking out of her hair? that is distracting to me.