The first one is a bit "blah" to me. A lot of pixel destruction going on making for uninteresting and impossible colors.
The second one there is a lot less damage, however I still think you pulled the style off. Personally I love photos that have a lot of editing done, however often times people don't know how to do it right. The second one in your case works because you haven't damaged important parts of the photo, just minor shadows and highlights.
Good job!