Hello Everyone! A new portrait!

[Trever1t]

Can you believe this is the first edit from my first shoot since last year??? So busy all my gears have cobwebs. Fortunately this kind lady wouldn't let me be lazy on a day off and helped me dust things off.

What'cha think?

 

[JonFZ300]

Great shot, beautiful lady. She could help me dust things off anytime!! lol

 

[smoke665]

What'cha think?

I think it's like riding a bike, once you learn, you don't forget. Good to see you back.

 

[Trever1t]

 

[Jeff1548 48]

Very nice.............

 

[Derrel]

Alluring

 

[vintagesnaps]

Wouldn't it be better with the second one to be able to see the red stripe on the car? It echoes what she's wearing. I'd be aware of placing subjects in relation to lines (especially in bright red), or created by shadows, or poles/posts, etc.

The first one looks like her hair had static electricity, had she just combed it maybe? Probably it's noticeable with light hairs against dark. The photo's nice, my other nitpick is the hand where a bit of sunlight is hitting it, and the way it looks against edges of bricks that catches the gray in between instead of the bricks (but it's somewhat in shadow so not that noticeable).

 

[smoke665]

Nice Ride

 

[tirediron]

Very nicely done. Agree with (the other) Sharon about the stripe in #2.

 

[Trever1t]

Yeah but you all know I don’t plan things out as well as I could! To be fair it was outside, almost 90* , the sun directly overhead blinding me and breezy!

 

[JoeW27]

Lovely model, lovely shots. Really like #1. #2--I'd like to see the red strip. I'd like the background to have a little more blur (so our eyes are drawn to the model and car). Also, if you look a the pose in #1--that is ideal for this model. I'm guessing she's petite--so in #2 where she's facing the camera, she ends up having fewer curves. So more of a side profile or angle would work better for her for this kind of concept I think.

Good stuff. And don't be a stranger--post more (please).

 

[K9Kirk]

In all honesty I think she's sexier than she is pretty and the car is smokin' hot! The picture itself is decent. Maybe if there were something more to it it would wow me.

 

[Trever1t]

Love my toys!