Horses in B&W (C&C please)

[giulio1993]

What do you think about my first B&W? Uploaded with ImageShack.us


ISO 100
1/80 sec
f/10
35mm focal length

thanks

 

[tirediron]

I think it has a little too much gray in it. I would like to see a bit of a contrast boost and try and get the whites white. Can I ask why you chose to compose it this way? It seems very 'chopped to me with only half a horse image right, but lots of empty space image left. I think there's lots of potential here, and I would suggest going back for a re-shoor to three.

 

[ShutterSpeed]

yeah..i agree..the framing and composition needs the most work...an more contrast.

 

[D-B-J]

yeah..i agree..the framing and composition needs the most work...an more contrast.

:thumbup:

Regards,
Jake

 

[giulio1993]

thanks for posting!



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I slightly changed the contrast and the GND filters I've used in lightroom.

About the framing: I've a shot of the two horses standing enterly inside the frame and to be honest I prefer the other...


This is it with almost the same settings


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Not a good framing here too...