Love the detail, and her makeup looks great. I also think you did a good job with using harsh light, although I feel like more dramatic shadows would have lended to a better shot. Positioning yourself so the light source is coming from a direction that is less from behind the camera and more to the side would achieve better light and shadow. My other nitpick with these shots is the editing. The tones are really beautiful and I feel they really compliment the shot, but I feel like the dark tones are so flat in tone that they've lost a lot of detail, especially in the hair. Hair of all things should be shown in great detail considering the amount of time that goes into making it looks good. Perhaps its an issue with exposure and you've clipped the shadows, but either way I think the loss of detail in her hair takes away from these shots.