I really dont know if its te way i take the photos or how i dont knkw how to edit them.
Photography takes skills, experience and knowledge and, in the three years since you posted last; while you may have been practicing, it seems that you haven't been acquiring the actual knowledge to help you progress.
Without actual knowledge, you can't know what is wrong and then you can't fix things.
The larger picture is over-exposed and thus there is no detail in the whites; the white balance is too cold, portraits tend to be warmer.
The boy is posed against a busy background and the featureless sky rather than you moving around so that the barn fills the background. With a wide angle lens that was used, the background is in focus and gets in the way.
The subject isn't looking at the camera and so there is no eye contact.
There are no embedded exif so we can't tell what aperture, shutter speed or focal length that were used.
other small issues
the thumbnail pictures is in png mode, which is typically used for graphics and is much larger than an equivalent sized jpg (that's why the picture is > a megabyte.)
both pictures are named 'image' thus it goes into our download folders as one of 30 or so files all named 'image'.