Please take this in the spirit that it is meant.
When I see work where the processing just completely overwhelms the content, it always seems like a mistake.
While the process might make some sense in the first picture, it so completely destroys the underlying content that not much is left to say about the picture itself.
If, as you say in the thread in the B&W forum, you are a relatively new to photography, I suggest you stop using these in-camera edits and concentrate first on producing good well formatted and exposed shots and then start looking at editing to make them fit your vision.
In camera processing means that you have no opportunity to make any changes in your images. You might as well be using slide film and have lost all the flexibility that digital images give you.
Lew