I am working on my black and white edits

[nychaimages]

Any feedback is definitely encouraged. View attachment 166159

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[D7K]

Nice use of light,maybe a little too dark in the shadows for me but nice work..


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[nychaimages]

Thank you! I understand what you’re saying about the shadows. I will consider that next time.


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[The_Traveler]

IMO, the blanched highlights without texture hurt.

 

[dxqcanada]

I agree with Lew's reply ... the highlight's are too blown out.

 

[480sparky]

The blanket is a huge distraction. I know that's not part of the monochrome effect, but it's far too busy for keeping my eyes on the subject.

Personally, I like the harsh look of the lighting in this case.

 

[Designer]

Any feedback is definitely encouraged.

For me, this is mostly a miss. What I see here is essentially two tones; black and the other tone, which looks sort of greenish on my display. What you're missing is anything in between, such as; all those other values that are part way from black to white. Also, your lens is not giving you any rendered depth. Why is the blanket only on one side of the model? Either both sides or not at all, IMO.

Pose and frame are pretty good, though.

 

[nychaimages]

Thank you for all of the feedback. I will take everything into consideration for future shots


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[dxqcanada]

Just to add to Sparky's reply about the blanket ...