Id really like some C&C. Not sure I really care for this photo

[SoulfulRecover]

I think its the skin tone and the blue in the eye. I dont know.

#1


Untitled by SoulfulRecover, on Flickr

Other photo from tonight:

#2


Untitled by SoulfulRecover, on Flickr

I wish I could have edited out the thick strands of hair running tight across her neck but my skills in photoshop are not that good.

 

[J_T]

I like what your going for in the first picture...
It reminds me of the picture "Afghan Girl"

 

[tirediron]

I agree that the blue hue of the sclera should be fixed, but I think the angle/aspect of the image is what bothers me. If the camera was at eye-level I would like it a lot better, but it's still a nice image. I think the second one is very well done, 'though the crop is a little closer than I would prefer.

 

[SoulfulRecover]

I like what your going for in the first picture...
It reminds me of the picture "Afghan Girl"

I love that photo haha.

I agree that the blue hue of the sclera should be fixed, but I think the angle/aspect of the image is what bothers me. If the camera was at eye-level I would like it a lot better, but it's still a nice image. I think the second one is very well done, 'though the crop is a little closer than I would prefer.

I seem to have a problem with keeping my camera level at times and drop a tad low. Ill re try this one tomorrow and see if I can get more on eye level and try a couple different angles. Ill see if I can get the lighting just right too.

 

[Frequency]

They are Brilliant...Both !!!

 

[JoshuaSimPhotography]

Nice textures in the skin, the lighting really compliments it too!

 

[thosewhotell]

I like the colours on the first one very much. My only comment would be that the scarf is too sharp vis a vis the eyes..... if the eyes were the sharpest element, then I think the shot works much better.