hi photogoddess,
i agree with craig, the highlight in the pic is a bit much, however the rest of that is awesome!
The second shot is interesting... its a bit busy for my tastes but i still like it alot, mainly that subtle peek from the helm that keeps me interested. Here some quick thoughts:
1. maybe a greater DOF
2. i think this might be better in b&w. The reason i say that is that the coloured flag distracts from the knight a bit.
3. Blur or burn the the top right of the picture (that includes that grey hair stuff).
4. I love the little sunlight on the armour! nice touch!
5. crop some of the stuff on the right out.
here's a quick sample of what i had in mind, its just quick touch up and its a bit 'overburned'. I realised i like the pic better in colour too

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I love these pics, do you have anymore?
