I'm SO not happy about this shoot- considering to not charge client

[Peanuts]

Before jumping the gun and saying you won't charge, offer a discount instead, as mentioned you are yoru own worst critic.

One thing I noticed is your PP on the eyes make them look glazed over instead of popped. Since they have dark eyes, it is okay to leave them that way (as much as darked eye individuals wish they were blue *sulk* most of us have accepted the fact ) sometimes the only pop they need is to dodge the highlights/catchlights a teeny bit