Jessie's Waiting ... 4 C&C

[Trever1t]

A couple edits of frames from 2014 that I had passed over back then. What are your thoughts?


_POR4664-Edit by Bill Grayson, on Flickr



_POR4677-Edit by Bill Grayson, on Flickr


BTW...what was up with the forum!!!

 

[Derrel]

I like the pose and use of the frame in the second shot...thw shoe LRC, the hand on the chair catching the light, both are great little details! Maybe lighten the face a tiny bit on #2? I think I like #2 just because it has a bit more visual information in it than does shot #1.

And yeah...TPF was DOWN, big-time, for quite some time yeaterday and last night. I am not sure when it was brought back on-line today.

 

[Trever1t]

Thanks Derrel, ya, a little more light on her face.

 

[Trever1t]

Nobody else wants to comment?

 

[dxqcanada]

Umm, I find that her breasts are glowing too much ... it is distracting (though some will say the opposite).

I like the second better than the first ... the first one has an odd environment, seems wrong.

 

[acparsons61 1]

In number 1 it looks like she's a bit nervous. Her chest is positioned awkward, I'd go for more shoulder toward the camera in #1 and a tad in number 2. The window on the left is distracting. I agree, her chest is too bright and distracts from her face.

 

[Rick50]

I like the 1st one best. I might get rid of the vertical streak of light on the left wall.​