TBH, I didn't even note this was in the Professional Gallery. As a casual candid, as it was originally labeled, I think it's fine. As a marketable image, I honestly do feel it's lacking in several areas. Again, it's your image, so if you and your client are happy, that's all the matters.
90% of the work that I do is candid. That is why my clients come to me vs. Susie Shootsalot. My clients could care less if it is 100% technically correct vs. expressive. As a marketable image? I did not ask, "Who would like to purchase a 30x40 print of this image?" Once again, I stated
I adore this image, and I wanted to share it. I didn't say this is the most technically correct image that I have ever taken. I didn't say this is going on the cover of Popular Photography magazine either. Yes, I am happy with this shot because this is MY style. This is MY work. I have made it this far in my photography career, because I have decided to stay true to that. If I had taken the advice of every Tom, Dick, and Derrel, I would not be were I am today. The great thing about critique, disregard this thread, is that I have always taken bites out of all that has been shared with me, and then applied that knowledge with my own style and vision. Derrel was questioning why I could possibly like this image. Well.....I just do.