Kat & Jeff

[Efergoh]

My first shoot with more than one model.
I've done couples shoots in the past, but they were married or in a relationship.
These two never met before walking into the studio.

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3

4

5

 

[jols]

he looks like ben affleck

hes good i think shes a bit wooden and unnatural looking. she looks very uncomfortable

but the poses and sharpness are spot on

 

[Digital Matt]

The one thing I have to say is that you have serious color temperature issues. These are all over the place, and not one of them appears to be correct on my monitor.

 

[Efergoh]

Correct is a relative term. The variants were intentional. I was tinkering for the most part. Some are warmer, some are cooler.

 

[nossie]

Comment: (not criticism) 1&2 looks like an ad for peadophile something or other. Dunno what your intent was.
3 is nice.
4 is nice.
5 looks like she knows it's wrong.
Again I don't know what you wanted to portray so I don't know if you've done a good job or not but technically and if I make my own titles they look like good work. (barring the colour comment, probably better to let us know your angle first)

 

[C.Lloyd]

And she looks like the "One time, at band camp..." chick from American Pie.