I don't feel too strongly about either version, but I think if it was my image, I'd go with the version with the poles/wire removed. I'm all about "clean" images.
But I'm still wondering about the light. How did you manage to get both the model and background/foreground so well-exposed? And I'm surprised there aren't any nasty shadows, or that your model's eyes aren't squinting. I would think that you at least had a scrim or something filtering the light.
And I'm guessing this was about 3 hours or so before sunset? Definitely not high noon.
Having such a bright light source on the model allows me to set the aperture around f/8, which lets me get the sky in focus compared to a wide aperture which would blow out the background. Having a bright light source on the subject also allows me to expose for the subject, which in most cases will require a fast shutter speed that will render the sky behind the subject clearly. It's different if I were to be pointing the camera towards the sun, which would require me to shoot at a slower shutter speed in order to properly expose my model, which would also blow the sky in the background out.
There were no nasty shadows because with the right use of lighting, it's something you don't need to worry about. Direct sunlight can be beautiful high contrast light, and you don't always need a scrim to work with it. As for not squinting, the sun was at a high enough angle that it wasn't shining directly into her eyes, and for most of the shots I had her keep her eyes pointed away from the sun until we were ready to shoot. I forget what time it was, but it was at least a couple of hours before sundown.