
I love the comments here sometimes.
I think it's a very neat picture. I agree that I'm not TOTALLY sure what you're doing with it, and I'd like to understand the thought process, but the effect is cool.
Making the VERY rash assumption that I have ANY idea what your intent was here, I wonder if it would have been better if you got everyone to be closer in size in the frame... like that 5th guy is way further away in the frame than most of the othere (you see all of his shoulders, more of his shirt, less of his face).
I'm also making the rash assumption that the dude in the lower right is the person this picture is intended for? Also neat. Again, not sure what it says, but neat.
I totally don't get the coffee stain. Also neat.
Regardless... neat.
Did I mention neat?