Long Exposure Edit C&C

JoeLeBean

TPF Noob!
Joined
Jun 9, 2013
Messages
130
Reaction score
14
Location
Shipley, West Yorkshire, UK
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
It's a very nice shot!!
However, for the composition I would crop down some sky and stay classic on the rule of third, keeping 1/3 of sky only.
Regarding the processing i find the 1st shot more efficient, the contrast works very well for me.
On the 2nd shot, the buildings blend to much with the background, maybe because the dark part of the building have similar tone with the sky. Also the foreground, by being more detailed and because its size on the image, take the attention away from the city, instead of leading to the city. Unless that you want the foreground to be the main point of focus the 2nd image doesn't work for me.

I'm not an expert but hope it can helps. Keep up the good work.
 

dutch27

TPF Noob!
Joined
May 4, 2013
Messages
19
Reaction score
2
Great shots. Definitely think #1 is the best. #2 feels like it has a haze over it compared to #1 for my taste.
 

cynicaster

No longer a newbie, moving up!
Joined
Feb 27, 2013
Messages
756
Reaction score
301
Location
Ontario, Canada
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
The colors might be a tad bit too saturated for my taste, but nice work nonetheless.
 

Most reactions

Top