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[GMulligan]

This is the first time I have posted pics here for comments so any advice/comments is appreciated...thanks

 

[tentwo]

The first to me seems white washed. Harsh shadowing from the sun, did you use a reflector or tried a fill flash? I would have given her more of the head tilt to the right and turned to the right just slightly to barely hide the right ear for a more fem look.


The second is a great composition. I would have probably placed the youngest more near mom, but it still looks great. Also the first distraction i seen in the whole photo were the center mans hands. I watch for this all the time as many individuals have a tendency to do that. the youngest had a great way for hands. The man in the right is good too. but overall a great shot IMO.

 

[Mully]

>>> The Op's edit preference states - My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit <<<

Changed the levels some

 

[frommrstomommy]

The 2nd looks great to me. The first not so much..

 

[Brandon Hill]

In the first portrait of the girl, she's very pretty but the way she's sitting/placement of the camera is not flattering her at all. I would keep that in mind the next time you shoot or perhaps there's a better shot from the images you shot.

 

[tentwo]

Color still appears faded. I made a few adjustments to show you what I was talking about. btw..I hope you didn't mind.

>>> The Op's edit preference states - My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit <<<

 

[GMulligan]

Not at all! Thanks for the advice!

 

[tentwo]

No problem. I was afraid that you would be a little mad as your profile says no edit after I submitted it I seen it. but glad to know. Also if you noticed I crop off the end of the wall it was a little distracting to me.

 

[KmH]

G, if it is OK to edit your photos, please update the edit preference in your profile to reflect that.