I hope I'm not rehashing what others said, here are my 2 cents:
- if you are planning on running a business, I'd not reference facebook on your main page. Facebook can be a great tool, but unless it is giving the user something more than what is on your site, don't add a link to it.
time is money. When I develop an online application/page, the less clicks the better. The less choices the better. I want to see something easy, quick, and know where to go without thinking much. Lead me to the treasure, dont make me hunt for it.
So right off the bat, getting to the main page, I have 3 choices. I went for the non flash one.
- I was viewing the portraits and I didn't like the colour of the font up top. Its a dark green on a dark background. I liked the ease and quickness of the images loading, but at first glance, I didn't see any buttons or ways to get out of there...until I noticed the hard to see font colour of your links.
- If all you have for now are two galleries, center the icons more. Having them left aligned like that makes me think that the site is unfinished and there is more to add. If there is, and say you add 2 more, then reposition the icons to have the 4 centered
Bio page and Investment page, nice.
Contact page... a little small thing I noticed is that when I hover my mouse over your email address, I get the small info box that says: "contact image 1". Might want to change that for something a little better sounding, or funny... just not so generic
FAQs... While I don't mind the background image in Conact, I find the one in here is a bit busy, specially when this is a section that should be easy on the eyes for the user to read. If the page is busy, people won't read.
I then checked out the Flash site. It took under 10 secs to load (I'm at work, so we have a great connection). I do like the somewhat jazzier feel, but I don't feel that the flash site offers THAT much more over the non flash, not to the point of having an intro page with the option.
Hope this helps!
Sending you a PM with a bit more
