MARE (be as brutally honest)

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  1. lordbaca

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    This was my first take on directorial photography. I really like the work of Gregory Crewdson and Didier Massard and attempted to create a similar aesthetic based on my childhood fears of aliens. please be as open and honest and give CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

    Andres flat.jpg UFO.jpg Alexa.jpg Tool Shed .jpg


     
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    Interesting concept.....
     
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    I love it.
    Would have liked the UFO to seem more unearthly.
     
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    Not too bad, really; the collection makes these stronger than would single. The last shot, the hose coming out of the garage, has some unused space camera left that hurts the composition a bit and make it off-balance. I like the street light/alien spacecraft,and I think it is very well-composed, with excellent use of the frame. The girl holding the stuffed animal is, I think, the strongest shot compositionally and thematically, but I'd like to see just a smidgeon more detail in the bottom of the frame. The prefatory statement helps these, I think, quite a bit; had they been thrown out without any explanatory text, I think the groups of pictures would seem weaker, and less interesting.
     
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    Would have been helpful to number them, but here goes. I like the first one (T/L) for it's simplicity. The second (T/R) looks like one of those big street lights you see in parking lots. The third (B/L) I like. Maybe a tad more shadow on the wall from the blinds. The last (B/R) I suspect I would really like but the resolution is to small to see much of the detail. Overall I applaud your thinking outside the box. You always hear how images should tell a story, and I believe you've done that!
     
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    I agree, the ufo was a street light near a freeway exit lol
     
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    I had never really thought about the negative space in the tool shed shot and I do see where you’re coming from but I feel that if I were to add anything there it might make the composition noisy and a little distracting. And yeah I get what you mean about the bottom of the frame of the girl photo. Great input, much appreciated!
     
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    retake that one.
    i love the rest.
    i want to see more of your images.
     
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    Ok so the second shot (TR) is in fact a street light lol and the last shot I did lose some detail because of a few factors the main one was that I did a stack exposure which will cause a loss of detail when blending the multiple photos. Unless someone has some tricks on how to bypass that?
     
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    Lol I will have to think about how to create a realistic ufo and photograph it in a real world context. Check out more of my work at 500px.com/philipbaca although most of my work isn’t so cinematic nor do I use much production as I did in these. Or you can follow me on Instagram @king_philip_thefirst but that is my all around art posting place
     
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    Loved each and every shot you shared!
     
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    I'm not really feeling any fear here.

    There are two reasons for this and why it's difficult in still images. In movies you can use devices to tap into your audience's generic fears, and this is key. Not everybody is scared of aliens and it's difficult to show a shot that will make them so. What they do instead is tap into our generic fears, they show aliens that have echoes of our earthly fears. They resemble spiders, bugs, slime, they kill with no remorse as in Alien etc. these are the way that movies tap into our fears, fears that we have in our general life. Another way is something that's used a lot, audience awareness. You make the audience aware of the danger *around the corner* where your character obviously isn't.

    The other reason is that you are using visuals that I more associate with films such as "Close Encounters" and "ET" where the character is in the darkness and the light full of colour and warmth is really indicating something of wonder beyond. Many of the shots indicate more fear from where the viewer is standing, you're really drawn towards the light. It is in the dark spaces that our fear resides because they are far more unknown.

    Classic movie making usually does the opposite, where you are drawn into a darker space. "Psycho" does this on a grand scale in the first 1/3 of the film as it takes you on an journey from bright sunlit normality to dark and raining. But it also employs another very clever trick that you don't notice. This is the *morbius strip/significance of the mirrors* analogy where Hitchcock transports you from the beginning to the same world in reverse, like a negative. When you show two things that are similar we sub consciously concentrate on defining the slight differences. This is why photos of identical twins can be oddly unsettling, the same with clowns. The key moment is when the character "Marion" is driving into the night. Many things happen and change that you don't notice, such as the fades between shots, and that Marion looks at the camera and smiles in exactly the same shot sequence as Perkins does at the end of the film. From then Hitchcock very cleverly presents a mirror image of the beginning of the film and the significance is that you find it vaguely familiar but don't know why, which is unsettling. It's like the staircase shots, a familiar item from an odd view, but extended over the first third of the movie.

    Again, you show us a very familiar view. If you had the opposite, shot from outside with the girl straining to see from the safety of a lit room into a darkess that held a hint of malice... Then you allow the viewers imagination and generic fears to take over.
     
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