crimbfighter
Been spending a lot of time on here!
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I feel numbers 1 and 2 are the strongest, with 4 falling in line after that. Overall, I like them! Beautiful model, and great motivation behind them! (And yes, definitely NSFW!) My C&C, for your reading pleasure..
#1 - I really like the pose. I think the rail is a bit distracting, in large part due to it being crooked. I also think her stomach and chest are too bright. I'm guessing it's a combination of her face being more tan than her midsection, and the strobe pointing a bit too much in the middle? The brightness draws my eye away from her face.
#2 - I think this is the best of the bunch, IMO. The only thing I can think of, would be employing a shallower DOF. Not sure what gear you were working with, so I don't know if it would have been possible. I think there is just too much detail in her shoulder and beyond, which again draws me eye away from her face. I also feel she is underexposed a tad. I like the catch light in her eyes, and the overall pose. I would like to see either a full on smile, or more seductive. She seems to be in a half smile for this photo. Otherwise, I really like this one!
#3 - This one, honestly, just doesn't do much for me. The pose doesn't feel very provocative, and the facial expression seems very neutral. On the plus side, I think you got the exposure closer on this one.
#4 - I think this one could have been the best of the set, but two things held it back for me. One, the shadows under her nose and in her eyes are too dark, maybe adding a reflector? I can't see her eyes due to the shadows, and that's a big distraction for me. Secondly, I feel the image beyond her, is too plain, too monochromatic, and too easily recognized as carpet. Maybe a nice print fabric, or plain white or black? I do, however, really like the pose on this one, it's the most provocative, to me. I also think the camera angle is a little too high. I think getting the camera much closer to the ground would really utilize this pose even more!
Anyway, that's just my (hopefully) helpful observations!
#1 - I really like the pose. I think the rail is a bit distracting, in large part due to it being crooked. I also think her stomach and chest are too bright. I'm guessing it's a combination of her face being more tan than her midsection, and the strobe pointing a bit too much in the middle? The brightness draws my eye away from her face.
#2 - I think this is the best of the bunch, IMO. The only thing I can think of, would be employing a shallower DOF. Not sure what gear you were working with, so I don't know if it would have been possible. I think there is just too much detail in her shoulder and beyond, which again draws me eye away from her face. I also feel she is underexposed a tad. I like the catch light in her eyes, and the overall pose. I would like to see either a full on smile, or more seductive. She seems to be in a half smile for this photo. Otherwise, I really like this one!
#3 - This one, honestly, just doesn't do much for me. The pose doesn't feel very provocative, and the facial expression seems very neutral. On the plus side, I think you got the exposure closer on this one.
#4 - I think this one could have been the best of the set, but two things held it back for me. One, the shadows under her nose and in her eyes are too dark, maybe adding a reflector? I can't see her eyes due to the shadows, and that's a big distraction for me. Secondly, I feel the image beyond her, is too plain, too monochromatic, and too easily recognized as carpet. Maybe a nice print fabric, or plain white or black? I do, however, really like the pose on this one, it's the most provocative, to me. I also think the camera angle is a little too high. I think getting the camera much closer to the ground would really utilize this pose even more!
Anyway, that's just my (hopefully) helpful observations!
