Milwaukee Brewer game, Portraits C&C

[rfosness88]

Some friends and I went to a brewer game. These are just a few spur of the moment pix. Thanks for the C&C.


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[rfosness88]

Anyone know how to edit your signature on this site?

 

[dustinpedley]

its in the user Cp

 

[fiveoboy01]

They just look like snapshots to me.

 

[rfosness88]

They just look like snapshots to me.

they are, just snapshots..... i just started photography. I've only taken a few pictures, just thought the subject matter was better than a macro of a flower...

thanks for the critique though, any ideas on how to make them better?(besides bringing to the stadium flashes and reflectors)

 

[fiveoboy01]

#1, I wouldn't use an outhouse for a backdrop, that's just me though.
#2, not bad for a snapshot, I'd crop it tighter due to the distracting background.
#3, could benefit from fill flash I'd think, due to the hat brim casting a shadow.
#4, Just don't like the expression, not flattering to her at all, and her eyes are closed.

I will say that in most of them you did at least manage to get the backgrounds out of focus which kept them from being really, really bad.

 

[Plato]

They just look like snapshots to me.

they are, just snapshots..... i just started photography. I've only taken a few pictures, just thought the subject matter was better than a macro of a flower...

thanks for the critique though, any ideas on how to make them better?(besides bringing to the stadium flashes and reflectors)

Perhaps you'd get a better response if your opening sentence in the first post wasn't offensive.

 

[rfosness88]

#1, I wouldn't use an outhouse for a backdrop, that's just me though.
#2, not bad for a snapshot, I'd crop it tighter due to the distracting background.
#3, could benefit from fill flash I'd think, due to the hat brim casting a shadow.
#4, Just don't like the expression, not flattering to her at all, and her eyes are closed.

I will say that in most of them you did at least manage to get the backgrounds out of focus which kept them from being really, really bad.

thanks, i appreciate it.