liebherr
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First and foremost, think about your shooting angle. How often do you look at a plate from directly above? It's not a normal viewing angle, so right off the bat you have one strike against you. Your plating isn't bad ('though there seems way too much food on it), but your garnishing is messy. There are little crumbs of mint leaf and salt all over; not the big intentional ones, but little bits. The viewer may not explicitly register these, but they will contribute to an overall 'dissatisfied' feeling with the image. The red napkin is way too large and overpowers the blander coloured food. Go for something small and white with maybe a stripe of colour on it. Lastly, as mentioned, your lighting needs work. More diffusion and bring the light in closer. The recommended book, 'Light, Science, Magic' is genius. When you get it. READ it! All that said, this image is head shoulders above most first-time phood photography!
Thank you for the tips! Yeah, this photo definitely isn't my best. That's why I picked it haha. I've been at it a few months and I'm disappointed that I still take bad photos... but I guess that's par for the course. Yes, the styling needs work as well. All the little crumbs were deliberate actually. I try to make things look slightly messy/believable, but I guess I was off the mark with this one. It's nice when it all comes together... unfortunately I'm not at the point yet I'm glad the book has another vote!