mobster 2

[photocist]

this is a redo of a shot i tried yesterday. hopefully the changes helped!


mobster 2 by photocist, on Flickr

 

[DeadEye]

I like the concept and the diagonal lines.

The horizontal spectral highlights along the edge of the wall molding look to be bleeding into a HDR halo.

The shadows straight with gradation.

If you were after the feel of the show "Punisher" Then its well done.

 

[PopCulture]

I love the concept. I don't know if the highlights are strong enough though. With a little touch up, that could be a movie poster.

 

[photocist]

thanks for the comments. i was going for a movie poster kinda look so im glad i kinda got that. yea those side things really blew out, i guess they reflect a lot of light. i tried to reduce that highlight but it didnt work so well. i already know im going to do this again so ill see if i can correct it.