#1 - Too close to the wall, the shadow being cast looks...I dunno...snapshot-ish. Also, the perspective is too tall, get the shot down lower, at least eye level to the baby. However, I do like the prop. I'd also like to see the exposure a bit higher, but that's just personal preference.
#2 - Again way too close to the wall, and again too tall of a perspective. Also, FILL THE FRAME. So much dead space around the baby. There's more square inches (for lack of a better term that's escaping me right now) of floor & wall than there is of subject.
#3 - Looks dull. I like the framing, her facial expression, her eyes and the catchlight...but the contrast is too lifeless and the colors don't "pop". It may just be a personal preference, but I'd like to see some more "pop" from the image.
#4 - Excellent. Nice contrast, I like the B&W processing. I may have shown a bit more of the "tu-tu" (is that how it's spelled? lol) so that it's not just fabric popping up out of the bottom of the frame. I may have also not had her SO centered, but she's not DEAD center, so it's passable IMO. I like it and I'm sure the mother liked it too.
#5 - The best. Good contrast, good processing, her eyes "pop" with life, and the framing/composition is great. Like I said, the best of the set. Well done :thumbup: