Morroco - A recent fashion editorial

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  1. FKP007

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    The lighting, retouching and color tones are all great. The pose in the last one seems a bit contrived to me, giving it a bit of an awkward feeling, but that's my only nit-pick for the entire set.

    I would have loved to play with the shadows and see what sort of images you could get by projecting them on her a bit.
     
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    All the poses are contrived to be fair, no one walks around like this in reality lol I guess that's fashion for you. Thanks for the feedback Dan

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    I agree about light, colors and retouching... very pleasing

    and because it's editorial, why even criticize :)

    what time was it, when you shot this?

    my favorite is #4 and at the same time it's the image I want to criticize the most :)

    nicely done
     
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    Very nice.
    #2 and #4 are my least favorite - #2 because she seems at odds with the shadow background, #4 because her feet and robe are clipped in an awkward, to me, spot.
    I couldn't choose between 1,3 & 5 for my favorite
     
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    With number 4 I had no choice as the model was wearing belive it or not...trainers lol she had a foot sprain which meant she couldn't wear heels. I therefore had to keep full length shots out lol

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    Shot around 2pm

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    My wife wants the outfit! ;)

    Great work. Thanks for the explanation about the trainers, I was wondering, too.
    Did you consider asking her to go barefoot? That might have worked in this scenario. :)
     
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    In 35 degree heat the ground is too hot lol

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    What would make 3 & 5 perfect for me is if she was completely within the shadow (rather than touching it).
     
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    Good point! One tends to forget about that sort of thing in England. :D
     
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    Completely within the shadow would mean light wouldn't be hitting her face or clothing in the way it needs to.

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